HAIRS.

MY HAIR IS STRAIGHT WHEN I GET A PERM BUT WITHOUT A PERM WHEN WATER HITS IT IT BALDS UP LIKE A LIL AFRO AND IT HURTS TO UNTANGLE IT!!!!!!

THE HOUSE ON MANGO STREET.

A TIME I WAS DISAPPOINTED AT MY PARENTS I WOULD HAVE TO SAY WAS WHEN THEY MADE ME TAKE PICTURES IN 4TH GRADE AND I DIDN'T WANT TO.AS A RESULT I PUT SALAD DRESSING ON MY DRESS AND MY TEACHER TOLD ON ME .MY MOTHER AND FATHER TOOK TURNS WHOOPING ME FOR THAT!!!! I WAS MADE AT THEM FOR A WEEK.

IF I HAD TO MOVE TO ANOTHER CITY I WOULD MISS ALL THE FRIENDS I MADE ,MY SCHOOL AND MY NEIGHBORHOOD BUT NOT VERY MUCH.I WOULD CRY EVERY NIGHT AND TRY TO RUN AWAY BACK TO MY HOME CITY.!!!!!



MY HOME IS VERY BUSY YET WARM AND COMFORTING!!!!!!!!!

(poem 4) WHERE THE HELL IS ALEX.

WHAT HAPPEND TO MY HOUSE AND WHERE IS ALEX.(A
I THINK AN EARTH QUAKE HAS HIT.(B
HE'S NOT YOU TO THESE THINGS.(C
HE MIGHT HAVE HAD A FIT.(B (ALLITERATION.)



THE DOG HID IN THE BATHROOM.(A
HE ISN'T SINGING UNDER THE BED.(B(FIGURATIVE LANGUAGE.)
I STILL CAN'T FIND ALEX(C.
IS THIS WATER HITTING MY HEAD.(B



WHAT SHOULD I DO.(A
I'LL HAVE TO CALL A PLUMBER TO FIX THIS LEAK.(B
WHERE THE HELL IS ALEX.(C
I SAW HIS HEAD POKE OUT AND TAKE A PEAK.(B

(poem 2) i hate lisa!

my sister lisa took a walk to the store(.a)
my sister lisa came back with no bag.(b)
my sister lisa is spoiled to the core.(a)
my sister lisa acts like an old hag(b)



lisa cries to get her way.(c)
daddy falls for it every time.(d)
I hate havin a little sister more and more every day.(c)
up my back she loves to climb maybe tommorrow i'll hit her with a chime.(D)


life slapped me in the face when lisa was born.(personification)
lisa sounded like a cat crying wah wah.(onomatopoeia)

(poem1)FREE VERSE. WHAT IS L.O.V.E.

THE WIND IS GOING TO WAR WITH THE RAIN.
I LOVE THESE DAYS ,THEY TAKE AWAY PAIN.
LOVE IS LIKE A FIGHT.
YOU PUT ALL YOUR MIGHT IN TO IT AND WHATEVER HAPPENS, HAPPENS.
BUT BEING IN LOVE IS SIMILAR TO TO WALK ON A CLOUD.

IT MAKED YOU FEEL STRESS LESS.


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(poem3) RHYMING COUPLETS!!!!!

THE SKY WAS ONCE BLUE
WHEN I USED TO STICK UNDER YOU.
THE SKY SEEMED TO FALL
WHEN I DIDN'T RECIEVE YOUR CALL.
THE SKY SEEMED GREY
WHEN I HAD A BAD DAY
THE CITY SOUNDS LIKE A TORNADO WHISTELING.
ALL MY DREARY DAYS SEEM AS IF THEY'RE LISTENIN.




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THE CAR ACCIDENT.(poem #5)

Walkin from the candy store like the happiest person in the world.
i gaze across the street as i looked closely and spotted a little girl.
Suddenly the world stopped as I spotted a car coming.




the little girl was standing in the street, I dropped my candy bag and start running.I saw my life flash quickly before my eyes,the car tires went screech, and to my suprise the car didn't hit us and suddenly i prayed.i woke up from my dream and I see this girl every day.






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